more of my art

[lilum]

just a few more of the things im drawin recently :) please comment

[DarkHorses]

Wow, I love that second one. You definitely can draw. :D

[Dorsum Oppel]

Wow, I love that second one. You definitely can draw. :D

No he can't.

These are terribly uncreative and not spectacular in any way.

[lilum]

No he can't.

These are terribly uncreative and not spectacular in any way.

hey wtf is your problem!? :mad:
i said i was okay with comments on it but i diden't say please be a complete dick did i!?
you need to get you bloody prioritys sorted out man! :L

[Magus]

No he can't.

These are terribly uncreative and not spectacular in any way.

This is funny, Coyote.

You don't need to criticize everyone who draws Manga characters or other things(I forget what they are called), because most of the people aren't really into surreal art. So don't expect Dali or Escher in everyone one.

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To OP. The best thing to do for your "art" is to draw Nude figures instead of cliched Manga characters. Not only Nude figures help you to understand human body and whatnot, but you will be able to draw very intricate and detailed Manga-styled characters.

[deadpie]

hey wtf is your problem!? :mad:
i said i was okay with comments on it but i diden't say please be a complete dick did i!?
you need to get you bloody prioritys sorted out man! :L

If you can't take negative critique you will never approve or get anywhere with art.

[lilum]

If you can't take negative critique you will never approve or get anywhere with art.

yea there critasicem and then these just being nasty
someone mature would justify why my art is shit not just act like a immature child and give no resone

[Dorsum Oppel]

This is funny, Coyote.

You don't need to criticize everyone who draws Manga characters or other things(I forget what they are called), because most of the people aren't really into surreal art. So don't expect Dali or Escher in everyone one.

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To OP. The best thing to do for your "art" is to draw Nude figures instead of cliched Manga characters. Not only Nude figures help you to understand human body and whatnot, but you will be able to draw very intricate and detailed Manga-styled characters.

I don't. I've seen some extraordinary and creative manga artists. I'm not just into surrealism you know. I like plenty of different kinds of art. All manga =/= good manga.

OP, stop throwing a hissy. I told you why I don't like it. I don't like your art because it's uncreative. You can fume all day, or do something original.

[deadpie]

yea there critasicem and then these just being nasty
someone mature would justify why my art is shit not just act like a immature child and give no resone

A mature person HAS to like your work no matter what? That's kind of unfair.

[Dorsum Oppel]

A mature person HAS to like your work no matter what? That's kind of unfair.

I beleive he was angered because he didn't read my justification of why I don't like his art.

[lilum]

oh whatever you twats :L

[Dorsum Oppel]

oh whatever you twats :L

You can chose to acknowledge my comment and do something to fix it and further yourself as an artist, or just call us twats and pretend it never happened. I suggest the former, although it's your choice.

Have a fabulous day.

[Obscene Eyedeas]

oh whatever you twats :L

I want no more of this please. Critique is critique and insults are insults.

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As for your artwork it could do with improvement, more original designs, more thought and just generally spend more time trying to improve, it is not the worst i've seen but not the best either

[starbrite5]

I like it, but I think you should work on proportions. Try posemaniacs.com. It's great for gesture drawings, which really help improve your ability to get proportions right.

[darkwoon]

I'll only comment on the technical side of things, and here is what I think about...

The first drawing

I'd bet this is copied from an original piece of art. Details like the diverging axis of the eyes, the size of the iris or the firmness of the lines (lines show some hesitation and aren't as straight as they should) strongly point at that.

My advice: copying is not a bad thing, but you need to do it "intelligently" - try to redraw as the original artist did, in the same order. Try to figure out the base structures he used and why.

The second drawing(s)

I find those pictures difficult to "read", as most of their elements display the same thickness, none really standing out. It is hard to get what they represent at first glance, because there is no definite sense to browse each of them.

My advice: study composition. The position of elements in a picture is important, and how you place things has a decisive influence on how the viewer will perceive the overall result. Playing on contrasts, on positive/negative spaces, on a natural visual progression, are all common "tricks" heavily used to make a composition more pleasurable to the eye.

The third drawing

One word: structure. That drawing displays a lot of details, but lacks basic knowledge of volumes and structure of objects.

My advice: Start with the basics, and learn to represent basic volumes (spheres, cubes, boxes, etc) in perspective. Then compose such basic volumes to represent whatever you want (including the human figure). Don't try to copy comics - instead, try to copy reality all around you. Decomposing any object before you into simple shapes should become a reflex.

Hope this helps!

[jasikajack]

Your drawing are a really a very nice and all three drawing are a best and I really a like all of drawing and I also try to make this kind of drawing.