When You Kiss Me

[Blackness_chic]

A Poem i wrote for my girlfriend. its short n its not that great either but hey i thought maybe i would post it. let me know what you think.


When You Kiss Me


When I talk to you,
It's perfect.

When I'm with you,
I'm in heaven.

When you touch me,
My world spins.

But when you kiss me,
I'm falling....

[nwshc]

You made that yourself? Thats pretty good.

[Blackness_chic]

yeah, thanx. just my feelings. its not the greatest but thank you

[WelshLad]

what do you mean by falling

[nwshc]

Maby falling in love? or maby in a state of highness (word?)

[Blackness_chic]

I meant falling as in like everything goes away, im falling in love with her all over again, like a fantasy kind of, fairy tale, falling out of reality and into something much greater.


*serenity*

[nwshc]

A HA. I was close. lol.

[Blackness_chic]

yes you were very good

[Anonymous]

I like it, wish I had that feeling more than anything in the world. I envy you.

[Blackness_chic]

yeah, well for me that feeling doesn't come easily and without a price. my family is mad at me cuz im dating a girl. they don't understand me tho. We are in love, oh well they will get over it..