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Church
August 12th, 2010, 07:59 PM
I been doing a sig series on photoshop entitled Tribute to the Armed Services, a signature dedicated to each 5 branches. So far I got 3 done and wanted to show them for your opinions. And before y'all say it the reason the text isn't blended in is so its easy to read.

Air Force: http://i649.photobucket.com/albums/uu215/Jbernick/AirForce.jpg

Marines: http://i649.photobucket.com/albums/uu215/Jbernick/marine.jpg

Navy: http://i649.photobucket.com/albums/uu215/Jbernick/Navy.jpg

Perseus
August 12th, 2010, 08:55 PM
I like the Marines one the best, but the Navy one would look better if you fix it. I can't explain what's wrong with it, though...

Ender
August 12th, 2010, 11:32 PM
You should make a Coast Guard one, i bet it would look amazing

Magus
August 13th, 2010, 12:00 AM
Wow, I love your work. They are amazing.

http://i649.photobucket.com/albums/uu215/Jbernick/AirForce.jpg

A10?

Put up a Raptor man!

chris4
August 13th, 2010, 01:21 AM
i like them!

Origami
August 13th, 2010, 10:12 AM
Okie doke, time for the asshole critic.

First of all, I want to slap you for slapping the emblems on top like that. If you're going to do something make it blend and flow together.

Air force: It looks too watercolored and the bottom left corner and the right side just don't go with the rest of the piece.

Marines: The cheesy cut-out ruined this piece, nuff said.

Navy: It looks like your boat is flying. There is no dividing sense showing the horizon or even giving it an aquatic feel.

Overall it looks like you looked up a very basic grunge tutorial and abused it. That, or you slapped random filters down and called yourself pro. You should consider practicing and reading some Photoshop tutorials around the net.

-Kudos.