Help!

[lewis.]

Hey guys! At the minute I'm sort of pursuing a career as a performer and finding it tough to get some exposure. So I've uploaded a few vids of covers of artists such as Snow Patrol, Jason Derulo and Kelly Rowland just so people can get an idea. Here's a link to one video I posted. Thank you :)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1MsntIVGSKg&sns=em

[Marcie]

I don't know if you want and critique, but here's some..

You're pretty good, I like the tweaks you made to the melody line.
However, I think something you could change is that, at the beginning of most of the lines, you kind of 'whine' out the note. As in I think you're trying to push it out too hard.. You are flat for most of the beginning notes to each line/phrase.
I think you have a great voice, and I love the tonal quality, it's just that notes lol :-)
Good luck, I think you could go far with that.