Awesome stuff

[DarkWingedAngel]

ok well Im proposing to my gf tomorrow and i was just wondering if this works ima pour mt heart out to her then read her this poem.









To my sweet love of my life
Will you be my loving wife?
All I ever do is think of you
Without you I don’t know what I’ll do
I promise I’ll be good to you forever
And leave you, I will never
If you love me and say yes
You won’t be sorry, I’ll give you my best
Life without you, I cannot stand
In marriage, will you give me your hand?
I love you Tay and want to be with you forever just say yes and will I leave? Nope not ever.


then im gonna hand her the ring


how does it sound? I want opinions.



oh and I forgot to mention im getting down on one knee and am gonna be holding her hand the whole time.

[aaronbrumbrum22]

I think that sounds really good. Did you right that yourself??? If so then I like it alot.

[DarkWingedAngel]

yes I did wright it myself.

[autumncook]

i think thats really sweet

[skinny_white_boy]

I think that's great! I wish you luck and hope she says yes!

[ShatteredWings]

You deserve this girl dylan.

good luck.

[Sage]

You're sixteen dude. Prepare for the best, expect the worst.

[kidkizzet]

good poem :)

[aaronbrumbrum22]

hey dylan just wondering if it worked??? hoping the best.

[Fruit_Tart.]

You're sixteen dude. Prepare for the best, expect the worst.
along the lines i was thinking. lol. :P

i think its really sweet and i wish the best of luck to you. i hope she says yes. :D

[Sage]

I by no means wish ill luck on you, or anyone else when it comes to love, but I have never in my life met a sixteen year old who was ready for marriage. Again, I don't wish to be a downer, I know what it's like to care for somebody so, but I do think you are rushing things here.

[DarkWingedAngel]

ok so I asked her mom if I could have her daughters hand in marriage and she said yes and gave me her word. I proposed to my gf last night and it went awesome she said yes, So all went good.

[Fruit_Tart.]

AWESOMENEST!!!! i wish the best life for the both of you! :)

[Kaius]

Congrats Dylan, looks like I'm not the only one that's been busy!

[skinny_white_boy]

Woohoo! Congrats Dylan!

[DarkWingedAngel]

thanks guys

[ackmedsgirl666]

yay congrats dylan
i wish u all the best of luck and happiness
have a great life :)

[Babobobo]

Well since it went swimmingly I guess you're somewhat in the clear, but don't expect it to be easy. It's NOT