Poem about my life

[kidkizzet]

Umm...this is just something I wrote the other day. I couldn't think of a title for it though. I would appreciate it if people could tell me what they think of it.



I said I was happy but maybe I was lying
I'm just numb, suicidal thoughts seem to be dying
Not happiness, slight contentment on the horizon
Depression fades, numbness overtakes, where've the lies gone?
Buried lies? Dead persona? No it's just hiding, son
It lies low, longing for signs of weakness, but there's none
Weapons disposed of, they're gone now, no deed can be done
Passing days, lasting ways fading away, the times up
Concrete road containing challenges and I step up
I'ma face them but this aint FIFA, wont win a cup
This is my life, this road, never ending 'til I die
When I pass, I'll fall through the glass path, I'll land and lie
In a coffin or as ashes, body and soul part
That's where this road ends and another starts
My life started anew but's always been the same road
Just climbed a barrier, I tried hard, no simple code
Walk this road, can never climb a barrier too late
Now to state, no barrier's a gate, they're all mountains
We've all enough strength to climb Ev'rest, it's not too high

[Andrew Ryan]

Wow, that is fantastic my man. Flows very nicely. I've no idea what you could call it though. But I really love that "passing days" part. Maybe you could take your favorite line from it and call it that?

[kidkizzet]

Thanks. I don't have a favorite line at the moment but I'ma attempt to find something good to call it. :)