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Obscene Eyedeas
July 18th, 2010, 08:15 PM
silver mercury in my dreams
understanding all that i see
initiating the bloodlust within
capturing the demons in sin
identifying the lies and the fears
destroying the life and the dream
elusive in essence it seems

prosecution for the fear of the real
amassing the saints for the seal
institutionalized for dreaming real
never to see all that is real

yesterday you decided on actions long assumed
opulent and decadent surmised
unrealistic views of the style

lamenting the woes of jesus
ostentatious he was in design
soul searching is just a design
eradicating the neck with the knife.

deadpie
July 18th, 2010, 10:36 PM
The last stanza was my favorite. I like how your words are becoming more descriptive.

Obscene Eyedeas
July 19th, 2010, 01:42 PM
I put in a few hidden messages i wonder if anyone spotted them :P

Thanks tim the first 3 stanzas are purposefully written the way they are to conceal a hidden meaning.