Becoming Midnight

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I'm writing a short story, about a girl who falls down a well and ends up in an old cathedral inhabited only by crows. To leave she must complete three tasks that will help midnight (the father of crows) grow stronger or so they tell her. I'm not sure if I'm allowed to post a link but I will just in case.

http://www.protagonize.com/story/becoming-midnight please read it and give some feedback, I have a few mistakes that I will try to fix