My reflection

[MadManWithaBox]

Look at me. Look at what I.. what I have become. I have to force myself to look in the mirror, force myself to see my own reflection.

The picturesque life. Torn, ripped apart. A broken glass shattered on the floor. Put it back it back, yet the cracks. The cracks still show.

Look at it. Look at yourself. I'm splitting my side, ripping apart. the pain is too much. The pain overwhelms. The pain overtakes every emotion, in my stinking human body.

This stupid, fucking, body. This frame that traps me. Not ever able to escape. not ever.. Locked in my own mind, with my thoughts torturing me. My head, my emotions, my body, my life, my past, present, future, and present, it all hurts. stuck in this stupid claustrophobic, body.

[nick]

Matt your writing always makes me think. This is really powerful. I wont say "I love it", that would be inappropriate somehow, and its too dark and brooding for me to love. But it has power, as I said, and more than that it has integrity. It also has truth that speaks to us all and emotions that, maybe to different extents, we all relate to and understand.

[MadManWithaBox]

I get what you mean. Thanks.

[MysticalBurrito]

Very well written. ^-^ I agree with what Nick said.

[MadManWithaBox]

It was a very personal vent thing if you get me. Thanks.

[Fiction]

This is pretty good :) Not as good as your others though if i'm honest, but your writing is never bad :)