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MysticalBurrito
July 2nd, 2010, 02:48 AM
Cross your heart,
Hope to die.
Burn like the sun,
Screaming,
Echoing in my ears.

Liar,
Disgraceful,
Floating,
Breathing.

Give me a reason to live!
Give me a reason to keep running,
Give me a reason to believe that you exist.

Your face,
It’s so empty,
Why would you do that?
Burning your eyes out.
Why would you kill her?
You strangled her,
Beat her,
Slit her throat and wrists,
The blood is on your hands.

Was it a attempt to forget her face when she screamed,
Cried,
Begged,
And bled?

MadManWithaBox
July 2nd, 2010, 03:08 PM
I love this. Specially the first part. Its like a song, but better.

MysticalBurrito
July 4th, 2010, 11:33 PM
Thank you. :)

hrecknoall
July 5th, 2010, 10:31 PM
wow...really good. I envy people who can write like that! Keep it up!

Mythical
July 6th, 2010, 04:33 PM
The third stanza is what meant the most, great job and keep it up