I despise the word 'cartoon'.

[Dorsum Oppel]

I also despise the word 'manga' when applied to my art.

Oh well.

http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash2/hs017.ash2/34197_137031466322770_100000477511664_328865_3132894_n.jpg

http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash2/hs061.ash2/36437_136862116339705_100000477511664_327916_3225236_n.jpg

An OC I've been working on, yay. Commentcritiqueyaddahyaddah.

Edit: Lookmoar.

http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc4/hs033.snc4/34007_137371082955475_100000477511664_330926_2985180_n.jpg

[Magus]

Then they are best called as illustration.

I hate the crosshatching. Just kidding :P

I will critique on the fluid mechanics of the human body.

In the first. Your character doesn't seem to be shooting. Plus, a thin body with a mobster gun. No. She must have a stance that give us an illusion that she is shooting. Her face is calm; ever heard of Shell shock?

We can't discern whether she is swaying back or laying down. If I say "swaying back" Her back must be arched back, with a grin face looking at where she is shooting. Also giving a dynamic effect to the skirt.

Plus, you forget the incandescent illumination that comes from the bursts of the gun; here, you want to do the crosshatch wizardry.

There is no flow in the smoke of the fag and the gun(remember the skirt too) Dynamic flow.

Kapow! Make some more for me, will yah!

The other two are superb. I am working on my anatomy. I hate male body >=|

[Dorsum Oppel]

Male body ist bitch.

http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc4/hs151.snc4/36894_138158599543390_100000477511664_335478_7281605_n.jpg

http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc4/hs141.snc4/36406_137882546237662_100000477511664_334033_6857951_n.jpg

http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc4/hs146.snc4/36667_138074566218460_100000477511664_335129_5956247_n.jpg

[TySpeedy]

That's more of just an OC.[: But yeah. It's cool. I really like it!!! ^_^