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MysticalBurrito
June 30th, 2010, 09:23 PM
Holding you steady in my arm,
Don’t cry.
Don’t ever cry.

You’re the light of my sky,
You’re the stars in the heavens.

If only you knew,
The pain that I went through.

You’re so far away,
My arms aren’t long enough,
Never were.

Held close to my heart,
Fearing to be broken apart.

You meant everything to me,
When you left my sky crashed down,
And my stars stopped shining.

Hate,
Or love?

Mistaken,
Or never meant to be?

The answer remains unanswered,
You’re gone now.
Lights will not shine,
Stars haven’t returned,
Missing my light…
Missing my Sunshine…

MadManWithaBox
June 30th, 2010, 09:26 PM
Dude. Everything you write is pure fucking gold. Seriously, its all great. Wish I was half as good as you.

MysticalBurrito
June 30th, 2010, 09:28 PM
Damn. I never knew someone would like my writing that much. ^-^;
You just made my day. Thank you so much. :)

MadManWithaBox
June 30th, 2010, 09:32 PM
I wish my writing as good as yours. This one is my second favorite, my favorite is the first one you posted. They're all excellently awesome mind.

MysticalBurrito
June 30th, 2010, 09:40 PM
I like the stuff you write so HUSH! D:<
^_^

MadManWithaBox
July 1st, 2010, 06:08 AM
But yours is great. Like really great. I'd rep you again, but it won't let me till I've spread it around some more.

MysticalBurrito
July 1st, 2010, 10:54 AM
xD ^_^ Thank you.

MadManWithaBox
July 1st, 2010, 01:24 PM
my favorite bit is You’re the light of my sky,
You’re the stars in the heavens.

Absolute brilliance.