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MysticalBurrito
June 30th, 2010, 09:12 PM
Lovely,
Ever so frightening.
Drowning in tears,
Wipe it away.

Dying to live,
Breathing to die,
Don’t let this end.
Tonight,
Tonight,
It’s going to end.

End this heartache,
End this bitter war.

Goodbye love,
Goodbye sanity,
Goodbye, goodnight.
Don’t let this end tonight,
Don’t let this night end.

Beautifully suffering,
Dying like a flower.
Peddles falling off.

Don’t leave me,
I hate you.
Don’t leave me,
I love you.
Don’t leave me,
I need you.

Gone like a breeze,
Falling apart at the seams.

MadManWithaBox
June 30th, 2010, 09:14 PM
And another brilliant piece of writing.

MysticalBurrito
June 30th, 2010, 09:15 PM
Thank you very much. ^_^

MadManWithaBox
July 1st, 2010, 08:59 PM
You are incredibly, incredibly talented. Please write some more. I love reading them.

MysticalBurrito
July 1st, 2010, 09:16 PM
Awh shucks. =^.^=
Here are some old ones if you want to read them. They're not my best, though. :P
http://www.virtualteen.org/forums/showthread.php?t=64358

MadManWithaBox
July 1st, 2010, 09:20 PM
I wanna rep you again. Stupid rep system.

nick
July 1st, 2010, 09:25 PM
I like it too - but you may be mixing up flowers and bicycles there, petals I think you mean.

MysticalBurrito
July 1st, 2010, 09:32 PM
xD We should talk sometime. ^_^ I see you're into writing too, so maybe we can give each other ideas on what to write. Or pointers.

And I see you like Doctor Who? o.0

MadManWithaBox
July 1st, 2010, 09:36 PM
Is that me or nick?

MysticalBurrito
July 1st, 2010, 09:40 PM
I like it too - but you may be mixing up flowers and bicycles there, petals I think you mean.
I wrote it late last night. I'll fix it. Thankies Nick. ^-^

Is that me or nick?
You. 0.o
Delayed post was delayed.

MadManWithaBox
July 1st, 2010, 09:44 PM
Oh yeah. I love doctor who. Adore it even. And I would very much enjoy sharing writing things with you.

MysticalBurrito
July 1st, 2010, 09:48 PM
I tried watching it awhile ago. I've always considered myself more of a x-Files person. :P

Do you have skype?

MadManWithaBox
July 1st, 2010, 09:51 PM
I do indeed. Doctor who - everything.

*Giant monster appears


YOU CAN'T FIGHT THAT THING YOU'RE NOT ARMED!!
Yes I am!
WITH WHAT?
Overconfidence, a wooden box, and a small screwdriver. Sorted.

MysticalBurrito
July 1st, 2010, 09:53 PM
Rofl. xD

Want me to pm you or do you want to pm me?

MadManWithaBox
July 1st, 2010, 09:56 PM
Pm me please.

Iron Man
July 1st, 2010, 10:20 PM
Thats..so...beautiful(tear trickles down cheeck).