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MadManWithaBox
June 22nd, 2010, 08:45 PM
People think death
comes wrapped in a big cloak.
People think death
is when the heart stops beating.
Death however
is not like that.
The darkness
the end of the light
that is death
the end of hope.

The death of the mind and body are, far too often seen as the same thing.
The body can supposedly live without the mind.
The question being, is it truly, what the vast majority of the human race define as living?
With a dead mind. No hope. No mercy. Never feeling, Never seeing or hearing the effects of life again, behind the eyes of the deceased. Everything swallowed by the darkness. The heart stops beating. But you're already dead.

Fiction
June 23rd, 2010, 05:45 PM
This is sad, but true :/ It's good :)

Sith Lord 13
June 23rd, 2010, 07:54 PM
Hope is what keeps us going. Hope is the difference between living and existing. You're absolutely right Matt. I hope you never doubt how skilled you are as a writer.

MadManWithaBox
June 23rd, 2010, 08:05 PM
Thanks. its not bad.

Scarface
June 23rd, 2010, 08:09 PM
I like it, it's very unique

MadManWithaBox
June 24th, 2010, 01:05 PM
Thank you.