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MadManWithaBox
June 21st, 2010, 06:46 PM
How much can one person be expected to take?
How much can a person take
before they just... give up?
Before they throw in the towel
and..

The despair deeps through the
body
Poisoning every thought in the mind
every emotion, every feeling,
crushing it.
How long before it completely encompasses you, destroys you, turns you into..
me?

A broken soul. A shell. A shadow of a real person, a living corpse, whose will to fight and resist has long faded. Never living life, just watching from the shadows . Not even knowing the difference between living and just.. existing.

Existing on the edge. Living only in your mind.

Forced into this state of existing. Totally alone, imprisoned by self imposed solidarity.

1_21Guns
June 21st, 2010, 06:53 PM
your a really good writter Matt, keep it up :)

nick
June 21st, 2010, 07:09 PM
Its thought provoking, I like the language and the way you've written it, its good. I dont like the fact that you can write it if you see what I mean. I think we all live life from the outside, looking on almost as bystanders sometimes. But all the same, there is always more to come.

MadManWithaBox
June 21st, 2010, 08:15 PM
I get what you mean. And thank you.

dstnyisurs
June 21st, 2010, 08:34 PM
I like it, Matty. It provokes your soul, draws us into you, one word at a time.

Secret_Keiko
June 21st, 2010, 08:40 PM
Ahh this is really good!
Just like the others :)
I'm really glad this one turned out so well.
You're right, I did enjoy it alot :)

Sith Lord 13
June 22nd, 2010, 06:27 AM
I ask myself that question a lot Matt.

Tres bien.

MadManWithaBox
June 22nd, 2010, 09:02 AM
Sorry, I ain't much cop at french.

Sith Lord 13
June 22nd, 2010, 09:06 AM
Tip top ol' boy work better for you then? :P

MadManWithaBox
June 22nd, 2010, 10:15 AM
Thats the one. :P

Sith Lord 13
June 22nd, 2010, 10:17 AM
Jolly good show ol' chap. Jolly good.

:) :P

MadManWithaBox
June 22nd, 2010, 10:22 AM
Lovely jubbly.