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deadpie
June 19th, 2010, 01:12 PM
Do you care to hear my propaganda of psycho babble frenzy
Disgusted of shit but only to be a piece of it
This tormented childhood goes on a looped videotape
Of a beautiful failure to try and communicate
Deteriorate and slip down the hole
Eradicate until there's nothing left to kill

My voice speaks affliction and I breath a plague
Dreams of radiation and infinite mistakes
It started from a bug to an ache
A virus only to create the resolution
Of a novel not worth reading
This rabid idiotic child needs to be severed
Before the flood of the deranged takes over his brain
Play a game of burden and point fingers at whom to blame
With blindfolds over our eyes
Does this type of mockery offend the blind?

Origami
June 20th, 2010, 08:43 AM
Not my favorite work by you Tim, I'm afraid to say.
To me, this piece lacks the emotional pull I get from most of your work that I've read.

deadpie
June 20th, 2010, 11:58 PM
Not my favorite work by you Tim, I'm afraid to say.
To me, this piece lacks the emotional pull I get from most of your work that I've read.

I know. I should stick to me writing about getting raped and doing drugs instead. I should never try to explore my creativity in writing in any possible way.

Origami
June 26th, 2010, 09:06 AM
/facepalm.
Not what I meant.