pixie1234
June 18th, 2010, 04:13 PM
heyy some of you may have noticed a song i wrote called 'drown in the pain' on here a while back and i would like to say thankyou for the comments and sorry i didnt reply but after a while of no comments i stopped looking lol :L
so anyways here are a few songs i have come up with, please comment and feel free to suggest any changes you think would be better :) xx
time -
So beautiful
In such an ugly place
Turn it around again
Just to see its face
As the clock ticks on
I see our time now gone
And half of it was wasted
In the time race
If only time could be turned back
(Back to when it began)
I would know my mistakes
Try to change
If only I could turn it back
(Back to see your smiling face)
Prevent all the tears shed
Prevent this from taking place
If only I found the way
Would you take my advice?
Tell me those words not to say
(That I said anyway)
Hold me still like you did
Then maybe in a year
We’d laugh and not cry
Not like this
If only time could be turned back
(Back to when it began)
I would know my mistakes
Try to change
If only I could turn it back
(Back to see your smiling face)
Prevent all the tears shed
Prevent this from taking place
11 other times before
The hurt I usually ignored
But with you
It all floods back
See my teardrops fall like rain
A pool reflection of my pain
You can say your sorry
But its too late
(too late)
If only time could be turned back
(Back to when it began)
I would know my mistakes
Try to change
If only I could turn it back
(Back to see your smiling face)
Prevent all the tears shed
a thousand nightmares -
wait five mins for me to run
to run and hide from myself
you ask me to point the blame
its at me and noone else
i look into the mirror
and im staring into black
im running, im hiding
trying not to face the fact
im running from
the thousand nightmares
banging on my door
the nightmares i turned into
only months before
i cant sleep, i cant dream
of all those happy memories
that once i had before
they came knocking on my door
a thousand wishes spring to mind
that i wasnt dumb or blind
but no matter what i try
i cant change
itll stay the same
screaming for my fate
i wish that i wasnt
running from
the thousand nightmares
banging on my door
the nightmares i turned into
only months before
i cant sleep, i cant dream
of all those happy memories
that once i had before
they came knocking on my door
i laugh it off each day
smile as i build a facade
cant you feel me tremble
as the night dawns in
i build a smile
fake as hell
chuck a million wishes
into the well
spending every goddamned day
wishing I wasn’t here
i hate
running from
the thousand nightmares
banging on my door
the nightmares i turned into
only months before
i cant sleep and
i cant dream
of all those happy memories
that once i had before
they came knocking on my door
these are my two best atm after drowns in the pain :) xx
below is the finished song I promised I'd post :) xx
Breaking me inside -
A heart beat
A heart break
Well isn't it just all the same
A broken promise
Another lie
Just watching as the time passes by
A teardrop*
Escapes me*
Why can't you see what you did to me
All that I can see
Is her in your arms
And it's breaking me inside
For you, for the second time
You were my boyfriend
She was my best friend
And you hurt me beyond repair
How could you do this
And then blame me
For the shit you left behind
Cos this was all your doing*
I was just the pain struck victim*
Stuck in this mess
That you left
Shards sharp enough too bleed on
A memory
So happy
But it just reduces me to tears
I was so blind*
I couldn't see
Well I hope you're happy
Another teardrop*
escapes me*
Why can't you just see what you did to me
All that I can see
Is her in your arms
And it's breaking me inside
For you, for the second time
You were my boyfriend
She was my best friend
And you hurt me beyond repair
How could you do this
And then blame me
For the shit you left behind
Cos this was all your doing*
I was just the pain struck victim*
Stuck in this mess
That you left
Shards sharp enough too bleed on
Well Im not gonna shed another tear for you
You made your desicion and cheating takes two
You knew my fears
You wiped away my tears when I cried
You said it was ok
That you loved me but that was all lies
*You were my boyfriend
She was my best friend
And you hurt me beyond repair
How could you do this
And then blame me
For the shit you left behind
You were my boyfriend
She was my best friend
And you hurt me beyond repair
How could you do this
And then blame me
For the shit you left behind
Cos this was all your doing*
I was just the pain struck victim*
Stuck in this mess
That you left
Shards sharp enough too bleed on
Shards sharp enough too bleed on
so anyways here are a few songs i have come up with, please comment and feel free to suggest any changes you think would be better :) xx
time -
So beautiful
In such an ugly place
Turn it around again
Just to see its face
As the clock ticks on
I see our time now gone
And half of it was wasted
In the time race
If only time could be turned back
(Back to when it began)
I would know my mistakes
Try to change
If only I could turn it back
(Back to see your smiling face)
Prevent all the tears shed
Prevent this from taking place
If only I found the way
Would you take my advice?
Tell me those words not to say
(That I said anyway)
Hold me still like you did
Then maybe in a year
We’d laugh and not cry
Not like this
If only time could be turned back
(Back to when it began)
I would know my mistakes
Try to change
If only I could turn it back
(Back to see your smiling face)
Prevent all the tears shed
Prevent this from taking place
11 other times before
The hurt I usually ignored
But with you
It all floods back
See my teardrops fall like rain
A pool reflection of my pain
You can say your sorry
But its too late
(too late)
If only time could be turned back
(Back to when it began)
I would know my mistakes
Try to change
If only I could turn it back
(Back to see your smiling face)
Prevent all the tears shed
a thousand nightmares -
wait five mins for me to run
to run and hide from myself
you ask me to point the blame
its at me and noone else
i look into the mirror
and im staring into black
im running, im hiding
trying not to face the fact
im running from
the thousand nightmares
banging on my door
the nightmares i turned into
only months before
i cant sleep, i cant dream
of all those happy memories
that once i had before
they came knocking on my door
a thousand wishes spring to mind
that i wasnt dumb or blind
but no matter what i try
i cant change
itll stay the same
screaming for my fate
i wish that i wasnt
running from
the thousand nightmares
banging on my door
the nightmares i turned into
only months before
i cant sleep, i cant dream
of all those happy memories
that once i had before
they came knocking on my door
i laugh it off each day
smile as i build a facade
cant you feel me tremble
as the night dawns in
i build a smile
fake as hell
chuck a million wishes
into the well
spending every goddamned day
wishing I wasn’t here
i hate
running from
the thousand nightmares
banging on my door
the nightmares i turned into
only months before
i cant sleep and
i cant dream
of all those happy memories
that once i had before
they came knocking on my door
these are my two best atm after drowns in the pain :) xx
below is the finished song I promised I'd post :) xx
Breaking me inside -
A heart beat
A heart break
Well isn't it just all the same
A broken promise
Another lie
Just watching as the time passes by
A teardrop*
Escapes me*
Why can't you see what you did to me
All that I can see
Is her in your arms
And it's breaking me inside
For you, for the second time
You were my boyfriend
She was my best friend
And you hurt me beyond repair
How could you do this
And then blame me
For the shit you left behind
Cos this was all your doing*
I was just the pain struck victim*
Stuck in this mess
That you left
Shards sharp enough too bleed on
A memory
So happy
But it just reduces me to tears
I was so blind*
I couldn't see
Well I hope you're happy
Another teardrop*
escapes me*
Why can't you just see what you did to me
All that I can see
Is her in your arms
And it's breaking me inside
For you, for the second time
You were my boyfriend
She was my best friend
And you hurt me beyond repair
How could you do this
And then blame me
For the shit you left behind
Cos this was all your doing*
I was just the pain struck victim*
Stuck in this mess
That you left
Shards sharp enough too bleed on
Well Im not gonna shed another tear for you
You made your desicion and cheating takes two
You knew my fears
You wiped away my tears when I cried
You said it was ok
That you loved me but that was all lies
*You were my boyfriend
She was my best friend
And you hurt me beyond repair
How could you do this
And then blame me
For the shit you left behind
You were my boyfriend
She was my best friend
And you hurt me beyond repair
How could you do this
And then blame me
For the shit you left behind
Cos this was all your doing*
I was just the pain struck victim*
Stuck in this mess
That you left
Shards sharp enough too bleed on
Shards sharp enough too bleed on