I can feel the misery dripping from my face.

[Dorsum Oppel]

SLASHSLASHSLASHSLASH
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
This poem is my outlet,
of SORROW. D:<

I AM SPARTA, ROAR.

Poetry is not longer poetry,
but therapy.
I HATE THERAPY,
IT MAKES ME SO SAD.

LOL, LOOK. IT DANCES. :yeah:

I get false compliments,
from people who know shit about poetry.
Because they want me to feel better.

LOVELOVELOVE.
BUT IT'S FALSE.
I'VE NEVER KNOW LOVE.
WAAAAAAAAH.

Look, now I'm writing a haiku.
If it doesn't look like a haiku,
it's because I'm being innovative.
And by innovative,
I mean ignoring the laws
OF THE ENGLISH LANGUAGE.

Cliche? Nah. I'm just expressing
my emotions the best I can.

I WANT YOU TO DIE MOMMY,
BECAUSE YOU NEVER PUT SYRUP
ON MY PANCAKES OF DESPAIR.

I use metaphors, they work good.

Like a glorious eagle, my soul soars
into the skies of blood and for one savory moment,
I AM FREEEEE. ;D

Poetry is fun. In case you think this is a joke, it's not. I meant these words with all of my deeply synical heart.

[Magus]

"LOVELOVELOVE.
BUT IT'S FALSE.
I'VE NEVER KNOW LOVE.
WAAAAAAAAH."

It doesn't exist; it never did. It is just a verbal cloak and nothing else.

[deadpie]

Deep. I feel the emotion.

Actually, if this is a parody of most VT poems, I love it. But if this is serious, I hate it.

[Clawhammer]

Either way, I like it. Very expressive. I mean, it's not Robert Burns or Shakespeare, but very cleverly composed. I write little poetry, and the ones I have are all about one thing, but the winds have changed. I don't share my poems, they serve now as reminders of how weak and foolish I was. Always keep your poems, perspective changes and they may prove useful.

[Origami]

You Nik, make me lol.
Wonderful.

[Dorsum Oppel]

Deep. I feel the emotion.

Actually, if this is a parody of most VT poems, I love it. But if this is serious, I hate it.

Parody? Nah.

These are the deepest of my profound thoughts and emotions. 110% SRS.

[Aspiringanonymous]

I absolutely love that ending metaphor.

[deadpie]

I think this poem is up there with "Jesus Is The Best".

[Dorsum Oppel]

Either way, I like it. Very expressive. I mean, it's not Robert Burns or Shakespeare, but very cleverly composed.

Lolol. -6 respect points for you.

[starrburst]

Nice, and it is great way to express your emotions. I think writing about your troubles seems to show you the good side of things, even if you think no good could come from it. Everything has some good in it, you just have to think deeper. Anyway, to avoid rambling on I'm going to finish there.

So, yes!
I really like it, truly!

[Sith Lord 13]

I WANT YOU TO DIE MOMMY,
BECAUSE YOU NEVER PUT SYRUP
ON MY PANCAKES OF DESPAIR.


Awesome metaphor. I really feel your pain.