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Nickk
June 13th, 2010, 11:02 PM
Whenever I see your face
I am left
Saddened,
I can never seem to shake
The feeling of being
Forgotten,
You never seem to see me
No not at
All,
Why do I do it
I just end up
Alone,
I guess
I shouldn’t stop
Trying,
Just keep on walking
With no place to get
To,
But if I keep going
Ill just
Break,
Then again that’s what I need
To finally be
Free.

iamniokekun
June 14th, 2010, 01:44 PM
Dude, it's good!!! I really like it. I'd love to see more. xDDD You should show your poetry to more people.