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[Nickk]

So this is the first time I've shown my poems to people, Tell me what you think.

A twinkle
A glisten
A transient gleam
Hope
You never let us forget you
Always sitting in the back of our minds
Why do we ask for your help
All you do is give us fabricated happiness
That dissolves at the first sign of conflict
We want you and need you
But all you are is
A twinkle
A glisten
A transient gleam

[iamniokekun]

I write poetry too, and I have to say that I like yours. It's deep dude, real deep. :3
lol