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Origami
June 10th, 2010, 08:11 PM
I'm going to write this in the VT thread box. Unedited and just raw ideas and emotion.
K Josh, GO!
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Scarlet and goldenrod hue
Twirling in eternal revolutions
All around and about You

Drew an offset for the blue
Painted tint in your eyes,
And like passion anew,

Created a likeness in me,
A likewise yearning for you,
Likeness you let no other see.

A likeness, you see,
An undying allure
Like a flower luring the bee

I'm simply and completly helplessly
Floating by your Heartstrings
As they silently, softly lure me.

I'm drowning somewhere in between
The depths of your eyes of blue
And all of the words I really mean,

A place I adore to be,
A place of Black and White-
Monochrome, sweeter reality.

I'm drowning in terminal bliss,
An unaltering euphoria
Complimented with a kiss.

A sweet embrace to hold it together,
Euphoric moments hold as mortar-
A forged bond meant to hold forever.

Euphoria holding two in place as Mortar
Never holds well enough when alone,
Instead making lovers into Martyrs.

Euphoria forces two to stand alone,
Stand two against the world,
Stand together, stand on their own.

Euphoria alone hold it's reckoning,
Lovers sinned, lovers condemned,
Euphoria stands aginst those it's wrecking.

Euphoria alone could never stand on it's own,
And substitutions only achieved nostalgia,
And it could kill romance unaided and alone.

A paradox turned parody when lovers discover
All their efforts stood upon hopeless causes
'Cause they never bothered to trust in one another.

Lovers seek euphoria within the other's heart
But don't trust the other within the confines of theirs
And consequently tear their pathetic romance apart.

Lovers in love but no trust for the other,
Destined for nothing remotely euphoric,
Die in the eyes of one another.

chrissm
June 11th, 2010, 10:36 AM
I really like that, nice work