Something I wrote..

[Marcie]

I wrote this last week and I don't think it's verry good... What do you guys think?

This is the first draft.. lol

You call yourself my friend
you say you'll never leave me.
Well, you already have.
You've hurt me more than you know.
You are no friend of mine.
Keep feeding me your lies.

You've broken my all the way doen,
You've stabbed me and ripped out my heart
You've wounded me so terribly,
My only defense is to bleed.

You thought I'd never find you out,
Discover all of your lies.
You were wrong!

I know I don'tneed you,
I no longer want you!
You ahve lost all of my love
You never deserved it
It was my mistake,
To think you could be trusted.