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Asylum
May 18th, 2010, 03:08 PM
As I lay here shattered
I sit here thinking of you
Lying here in a broken mess
While tears stain my pillow
There is nothing to hope for
Nothing to hold onto
For I am nothing.
I just want the pain to go away
I don’t want to be broken..
I can’t forget the feeling, it hurts too much.
I grow numb with intense pain
As I grab a piece of broken glass
To feel some relief
The deeper I go
The better I feel
The more satisfied I am with myself
Beautiful crimson red drips down from my veins
Staining my sheets.
I still can’t hide from this pain.
No matter how many times I cut, no matter how deep I go
The pain returns.
Killing me inside.
For I know I’m alone in this world
Alone and shattered
A broken mess
For I am nothing.

ExEmoBlood
May 19th, 2010, 08:43 AM
Not bad. I really enjoy the dark/gothic style of poetry, and art in general. Though, I feel like I've read it before.