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SlightlySane
May 9th, 2010, 10:57 PM
There once was a man who was young in his years
He dreamt up the stories of everyone’s fears
Kidnaps and killings, Robbings and Rapes
He dreamt of them all without an escape

Late in the night he would wake with a fright
His clock struck the noon that lacks all day’s light
Tossing and turning, with much sweat on his brow
He dreams other’s dreams but he doesn’t know how

As the days keep passing the nightmares get worse
He is put in the place of that dead women’s hearse
Through all of these eyes he sees such a fate
That no one would wish upon any one’s date

This man is a boy just like others, the same
Yet this young man his dreams, are not of the tame
He sees and hears all their fears and their screams
Watching first person as they rip out their seams

Each night he will wake until time meets his mind
This Midnight dreamer can never leave this hard bind
He’ll live through his dreams and the nightmares of day
Feeling pain and the fear for which none will pray

He takes none upon to notice his trouble
Moving on in his days never taking a double
And a legend he’ll be with his stories of seizure
Dreaming on into night is The Midnight Dreamer

Bougainvillea
May 9th, 2010, 11:51 PM
I like this alot, Ryne. ;)

The Madness.
May 10th, 2010, 01:12 AM
This is amazing!

AllThatIsLeft
May 10th, 2010, 01:15 AM
Very niceely Done. :)

Blood
May 10th, 2010, 02:37 PM
Awesome, Ryne.

SlightlySane
May 10th, 2010, 05:45 PM
Thank you very much everyone I really appreciate it :)

peaceloverugby
May 10th, 2010, 08:04 PM
I'm constantly amazed by your ability to write. Very well done Ryne :)

ErykaInspire.
May 11th, 2010, 04:19 PM
Omg... Ryne, this made my jaw drop. How the hell can you write that amazingly!? *Jealousyyyy* ;o

:P <3

This really is amazing.. Good enough to get published.

BlackBetty
May 11th, 2010, 08:37 PM
Very good, Ryne :)

PatrickZii
May 11th, 2010, 09:29 PM
I really like your rhythm.

starbrite5
May 11th, 2010, 09:38 PM
I really like this. :)

SlightlySane
May 12th, 2010, 08:31 PM
Thanks again everyone :)
Eryka <3 I'm glad you thought it was great :)
Connor, thanks :) that means a lot to me

Titan
May 19th, 2010, 08:38 PM
That was awesome.