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May-
May 4th, 2010, 05:25 PM
I'm a singer-songwriter but it's been like a couple of months since I really finished a song. It used to work when I needed to talk about my problems, but now not even a song I can finish :( Anyway, just wanted to share the few verses I wrote.

If I come up with the rest, I'll let you guys know.



My suicide letter is finished
Soon enough I know I'll need it
Because the pain is growing stronger
And that's what's going to kill me

If I could only give up the pills
They control all that I feel
I realize I'm too young, I'm sixteen
But don't come telling me nothing's real

You don't know, you don't know
what's like to be on your own
to lose what makes you strong
at only nine years old
You'll never have a clue
what's like to try all you can use
to hide the scars razors do
cause depression is bigger than you

Asylum
May 4th, 2010, 06:51 PM
this is really nice, depressing of course but i'm relaly loving this good job :)

May-
May 5th, 2010, 02:51 PM
Thank you.. when I have no one to talk to, I turn to music, it's kinda like my closest and best friend

The Madness.
May 5th, 2010, 08:02 PM
Music does help.
I listen to it when I'm feeling bad, because I have no music ability. :P
If it will be the kind of genre music I listen to, I would listen to this. =]