An Unquiet Mind

[Fiending_the_freedom]

Take my sins, and wipe them clean.
Take My memories and remove what i've seen.
Take the scars, and let me forget.
Take The shame, Take the regret.
Put me to sleep (and) close my eyes.
Lock away the secrets (and) all the lies.
I love you like Yesterday, but Yesterday is gone.
Do (not) forget me; just say so long.
Trying to close my eyes without replaying the images in my mind.
Sometimes i wonder how you can be so blind.

that laugh used to be my adrenaline is now a sick reminder.
W.a.r.n.i.n.g: symptons of change is everything i am.

[MoveAlong]

I liked it, and I think I was in one of the best moods to read it :D It sounded better because of the organ music I'm listening to :P

[Parasite]

the idea was good, but the poem was done poorly with little thought of detail or structure. I still think your pretty good though