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Harley Quinn
May 2nd, 2010, 03:21 AM
I don't even know why I wrote this, but I kinda like it, critique, and what not, improvements, suggest them. :)

Pull the gun and shoot her brains out
Blood splatter, decaying matter,
Call emergency services
Hello which service do you require,
Police service

There's been a accident
Brain fragments on the carpet,
What's happened sir,
I said there's blood splatter and decaying matter

Excuse me sir!
Yes mister how can I help
Your one evil bastard,
With a temper problem

You see I didn't mean to
I just grabbed the high heeled shoe,
It's not my fault she was standing in the way
If only see knew she'd have to pay.

Ha, that shoe was weak,
I got a hammer
Wacked that bitch into next week,
A* hit in my book.

Chuckle at her face,
Blood, bruises
Ha, i see that as a acomplishment
She got what she deserved

I wasn't yet satified,
Did I tell you, I have a gun hidden?
A 22 caliber pistol
Silenced.

Now, I wouldn't want my neighbours hearing would I?
Who am I kidding,
Gives me kicks,
They know she's in pain

I find a beauty in brain fragments,
Times New Roman the type,
I blew her fucking brains out
Slut asked for it

Sir, could you repeat that please, I'm lost
Sure no problem hang on
What's the font type again?
Oh, Times New Roman

I wacked her one with a high heel,
Got a hammer smashed her face in,
Shot her into next week,
And there's brain fragments everywhere

Wait, are you saying you killed her.
I believe so
Who the fuck are you
Ha, let's just say I'm no hitman

Ah, now look,
Sitting in a jail cell,
Looking like a hobo
Stupid bitch is dead

She got what she deserved

2/05/10. 01:29am

pixie1234
May 2nd, 2010, 01:00 PM
its good.... scary but good :L i was just wondering though.... what made you write this xx

Harley Quinn
May 3rd, 2010, 04:37 AM
Well, I couldn't sleep, and I was reading this book "Faithless by Karin Slaughter" kinda gave me the idea to write this

MysticalBurrito
May 5th, 2010, 08:10 PM
o_o Wow Siobhan. I like it. :)

Blood
May 5th, 2010, 09:27 PM
This is really good Siobhan.