Love

[Blood]

I wrote this awhile ago...just remembered I had it lol. Tell me what you guys think.


Relationships end as minutes fly by
One day you’ll swear you’re in love
And the next you’ll believe it’s all a lie

You told yourself he was the one
Said he was your night and day
Swore he was your sun

He made you smile
You thought he was a win
You said you’d walk a thousand miles
Just to be in his arms again

But now its fallin apart
Got into an argument
Forgot how it start

All you remember are those words he spoke
The two that ended it all
The two that hurt the most
We’re over.

So this is how it ends
He left you crying
You felt like you were dying

But most of the time, that’s how it goes
You feel so in love
Then he leaves you, and runs off with some hoe

[Scarface]

Then he leaves you, and runs off with some hoe
This was a funny part. jess I really like this I can tell you poured your feelings into this and I feel your pain in this.
Love it :cool:

[Blood]

This was a funny part. jess I really like this I can tell you poured your feelings into this and I feel your pain in this.
Love it :cool:

You're right Ronnie, I did. Don't know if that's good or bad though lol.

Thanks (:

[Scarface]

That's a really good thing. Pouring your feelings and a "vent" into poetry is a good way to get things off your chest. Don't stop continue this :)

[Blood]

That's a really good thing. Pouring your feelings and a "vent" into poetry is a good way to get things off your chest. Don't stop continue this :)

I'll try (: thanks.

[Scarface]

Remember it doesn't have to be perfect. Just express how you feel in a way that shows how you feel like you did above. I think your doing good :cool: