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Cosmic
April 26th, 2010, 06:40 PM
Another try at environmentalist poetry...

Smog

Through pin-pricked fabric;
We watch illumination through
Holes emitting the glow.
We burn bad incense;
And watch cool grey
Patch up the speckled intrusions.

As the world grows dull,
We light one more,
Faint ever further
Into sullen canvas,
Painting a picture
With the lights omitted.

Harley Quinn
May 2nd, 2010, 03:53 AM
I really like this one! :mrgreen:

Cosmic
May 4th, 2010, 07:53 PM
Thanks Siobhan, glad you enjoyed it. :-)