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deadpie
April 19th, 2010, 08:00 PM
Can this piece of marble stone
Represent my fantastic fucking life
Sympathetic monument with my name carved in it
Don't cry by my grave
When your the core of my hate

My teeth sinking in soft skin
I'm tasting the blood of the one and only virgin
Mary who carries her dead babies
Filling up her cunt with cum
This Gas mask pleasure
Of Skin cancer models
To fill up the hole when it seems so hollow

The ending scene of my life is me crawling on my knees
God comes down and I tell him to forgive me
And he just pisses all over my face

I laid on the floor with a wound to the face
You dragged me down the stairways
Decomposed a soothing death
Where a bullet slept in my head
And if that is all you got
Don't put roses on my grave
All they do is fucking rot

magikarpy
April 21st, 2010, 04:14 PM
Like I said in chat. I love it. Very morbid.

Shadoukun
April 21st, 2010, 05:02 PM
Your writing isn't very good. But it does show you could benefit from some help...

deadpie
April 22nd, 2010, 03:48 PM
Your writing isn't very good. But it does show you could benefit from some help...

Thanks for the constructive criticism on showing how it could of been better.

Btw sage

Blood
April 23rd, 2010, 04:58 PM
Nice Tim.