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YesterdaysNews
April 18th, 2010, 07:55 PM
Look at the shit covering the mirror
Take your hand and wipe it off.
The dust and dirt, sweat and blood,
It covers over your pretty face.
Clean the shit off of the damn mirror.
See how the clean mirror shines?
Look at your reflection now,
Not so pretty any more.
Confused? I am too.
How did the fucked up dirty mirror
Make your face look so damn beautiful?
The shit on the mirror clouded your mind
Covered up the truth under pretty little lies.


* random poem that I wrote in five minutes. it doesn't make much sense and it's horrible, but feedback is appreciated, good or bad *

MysticalBurrito
April 18th, 2010, 08:03 PM
I like.

Greggy
April 18th, 2010, 11:35 PM
XD I love it, the humor is great, but the message is deeper than one might think.

YesterdaysNews
April 19th, 2010, 04:24 PM
Thanks Karina.
Where do you find the humor, Greggy? o.0. Thank you.

Blood
April 20th, 2010, 03:36 PM
I really like it Amanda (: