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Skeletal-Chic
April 15th, 2010, 05:03 PM
This poem is about a Superman disillusioned with trying to save the ingrates who inhabit the world.

Looking out over a city of steel,
the Man of Wonder stirs in bed.
A female arm draped across his chest;
tossed aside as he grips his reeling head.
He looks across at the red headed tart,
Some bitch he picked up on the street.
The cloth between them still sticky from passion;
Her thighs leaking His seed on the sheet.
He pushes her aside and rises,
Naked in the cold, bitter, morning light.
His body, his beer gut and hairy crotch;
Patting his chest he murmurs "Shit I'm loosing the fight."
Putting his forehead to the cold glass,
He looks over "his" city, his slice of earth.
The reflections in the glass stinging his eyes;
the golden emblem and whore priced more than her worth.
Turning to pull on his uniform and cape,
Once again the big blue boy-scout.
The slut moans and stirs in her intoxicated daze;
our Man slams a fist to her face and walks out.

Sith Lord 13
April 15th, 2010, 05:47 PM
Wow. I really enjoyed it. I like the dose of realism given to DC's usually squeaky clean universe.

Skeletal-Chic
April 16th, 2010, 03:48 PM
thanks :) glad you liked it :)

Fiction
April 19th, 2010, 04:49 PM
Omg thats awesome. Your poems always make me stop to read. I can't stop half way through and the world goes silent... cause all my concentration goes on it :) And then i always have to go back and read it again. Stunning... is the only word i can think of :)

Skeletal-Chic
April 19th, 2010, 04:55 PM
wow.... that's really poetic praise Kitty :D *huggles*

Fiction
April 19th, 2010, 04:57 PM
Np :D *huggles* x