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Skittle Flavored
March 31st, 2005, 03:56 PM
im not a writer, this is my 1st time writing something, but i felt like i needed to write something...so here!


Someone was screaming in my head, as my body felt like a ton of lead.

i'll never forget this day, i saw her and wanted to say.

i love you so much its hurts, if u wernt there id be under dirt.

please dont leave me, cause i love thee.

then this big guy came by, held her in his arms, i cried.

as i ran from there, i saw that no one cared.

as i ran through the front door, "she wont see me anymore"

later i saw her down there, crying and pulling back her hair.

she looked up to me and said, "i couldnt keep you outta my head"

she said"be back in a sec" now i wish i didnt tie this rope 'round my neck

i love you so much its hurts, if u wernt there id be under dirt.

please dont leave me, cause i love thee.



THE END!

Anonymous
April 4th, 2005, 05:12 PM
wow... if you polished that up a little it would make a great emotive poem :D nice job
yeah i agree! :D

Skittle Flavored
April 5th, 2005, 04:56 PM
yay! :D :D :D i thought of that is lituarater class... :lol:

Anonymous
April 5th, 2005, 07:09 PM
i thought you were gay tim.

Skittle Flavored
April 9th, 2005, 12:05 AM
you thought right. this is my friends problem...exept the hanging part...but...yea...so...tee-hee...I GOT AN A ON IT!! WOO HOO!