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Fiction
April 14th, 2010, 04:37 PM
This is my first song written for my band :)

Sitting here, trying not to cry
Wondering if this will be your end tonight
Close my eyes to pretend
That these black clouds will have an end

I tried so desperatley to save your life
But i know i failed you tonight
Can't move on, can't go back
My view of life oh so black

What would i do if you dissapeared
All i'm scared of, all I feared
Just speak me one last word
Your inner voice that can't be heard

I tried so desperatley to save your life
But i know i failed you tonight
Can't move on, can't go back
My view of life oh so black

Sick with guilt of your death
Should i have helped or should i have left
I see you suffered the pain of life
I wonder if what i did was right


I tried so desperatley to save your life
But i know i failed you tonight
Can't move on, can't go back
My view of life oh so black

As you bleed, i bleed with you
Can't control my greif without you
Numbness without you is all i feel
This can't be happeneing this can't be real

Comments please :) If anyone can think of a better name, or if you prefer one of the two names above, please let me know :)

Skeletal-Chic
April 14th, 2010, 04:39 PM
That Was Beautifully tragic <3 I loved it :D

Fiction
April 14th, 2010, 04:40 PM
Beautifully tragic? :L And thanks :)

Skeletal-Chic
April 14th, 2010, 04:46 PM
It made sense in my head lol

Fiction
April 14th, 2010, 04:50 PM
Okayys :L x

munchausen
April 14th, 2010, 07:30 PM
sort of upsetting and emotional but at the same time it seems like a beautiful song

Fiction
April 14th, 2010, 08:08 PM
Thanks :)

Skeletal-Chic
April 15th, 2010, 04:06 AM
sort of upsetting and emotional but at the same time it seems like a beautiful song

That's what I meant to say! xD

Fiction
April 15th, 2010, 11:23 AM
Lol :P x