thanks a lot

[Obscene Eyedeas]

Let it go, just let it go
No more lies, your just so low
Liars, fueds you all disgust me
Dont make me part of your games

Lieing, cheating heartless scum
You stole my love and happiness
You shredded it all for entertainment
As you left me broken by the furnace

Friendship is a joke to ye
And i was your fool
Im done with ye
The promise is broken

my final verse is also your hearse
within my mind ye are dead
For the sins ye commited and the deeds that ye have done
Ye are nothing to me now, forever more I Am Done.

[Sage]

Let it go, just let it go
No more lies, you're just so low
Liars, feuds, you all disgust me
Don't make me part of your games

Lying, cheating, heartless scum
You stole my love and happiness
You shredded it all for entertainment
As you left me broken by the furnace

Friendship is a joke to ye
And I was your fool
I'm done with ye
The promise is broken

My final verse is also your hearse
Within my mind ye are dead
For the sins ye committed and the deeds that ye have done
Ye are nothing to me now, for_evermore I am done.

Editing makes your work more readable.

Edit: Also, the title should be capitalized.

[Obscene Eyedeas]

Sorry when one is using their phone they can miss these things