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deadpie
April 10th, 2010, 01:19 PM
Circle of life that spins around lies
And in the end everyone dies
Of this happy fucking story on the casual
Modern fetish post apocalyptic dream

There's a rapist walking by you everyday
A masochist, pervert, and everything you hate
That's a piece inside you
There's a Jesus and a gun
A bomb in everyone.
Deep inside your fucking hearts
I'm ready to tear them apart
Every human is a hypocrite afraid to admit it
You'll look in the mirror and not know who you are
I can guide you to the end
But only you know where it starts

When I know I'll never be a normal person ever again
I splatter my brains out like a Pollock painting
In heaven it seems like it's always raining
A little tragic and I've fucking had it
Laid on the bathroom tile
Raped and slaughtered while they laugh and smile
I am God's perfect fuck up
Tied up and fucked to be judged
In the end this world gets what it wants

Obscene Eyedeas
April 10th, 2010, 01:24 PM
Interesting you have a unique style. I quite liked this poem

Harley Quinn
April 10th, 2010, 01:40 PM
That was interesting :)
good job!

Skeletal-Chic
April 11th, 2010, 11:31 AM
That was a lot more interesting than the really offensive (and i don't get offended easily) one that got locked. It reminded me a lot of Chuck Palanhiuk's book "Haunted"

Scarface
April 11th, 2010, 11:37 AM
Dude that was fucking raw bro. I thought your Jesus one was awesome.

deadpie
April 11th, 2010, 01:27 PM
Thanks guys. I wasn't aiming for the shock value in this one really.