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The Batman
April 9th, 2010, 04:42 PM
The walls are bleeding
And dripping red
While I sleep so peacefully
Inside of my bed
He had it coming
Since the day it began
He was just a boy
Acting like a man
He came to me
And broke my heart
So I found his ass
And tore him apart
Buried his body
Inside of the wall
Then look and smiled
While watching the blood fall
Then fell fast asleep
Laying in my bed
And slept through the night
As the walls bled
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See if you can guess my inspiration for this.

Perseus
April 9th, 2010, 04:44 PM
Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamn. Interesting.

mach5
April 9th, 2010, 11:15 PM
i like this a lot. it reminds me of the the tell tale heart by edgar allan poe

AllThatIsLeft
April 9th, 2010, 11:25 PM
LOLOLOL. Love this. and of course I can tell who's it about :D

The Batman
April 10th, 2010, 12:33 AM
i like this a lot. it reminds me of the the tell tale heart by edgar allan poe

That's my inspiration i was waiting on someone to put them together.

Also Paula :P

pixie1234
April 11th, 2010, 12:21 PM
aww i really like this it really stands out from other works. really good (Y) xx

Skeletal-Chic
April 11th, 2010, 12:33 PM
really good :D I loved it! So dark :D