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Cosmic
April 3rd, 2010, 10:25 AM
Critiques, comments and thoughts most welcome and encouraged. <3

Words That Sink

Peacefully…
Catastrophe rips
Internally.
And as you speak-
Blood pours. Choking.

Drips tell the path
To your repugnant aftermath.
Dead inside.
Dead outside.
Gone.

A puddle that wreaks,
That no-one seeks.

Asylum
April 3rd, 2010, 10:46 PM
I really love this its do deep

Cosmic
April 4th, 2010, 11:13 AM
Glad you enjoyed it. :D