my songg.

[xxfirekitten.]

ehh i have a poem i wrote last night because my bf broke up with me.
i look to the sun. it's not shining for me anymore.
theres only darkness now.
i wanted you, only you, only you.
you took my heart, tore it in half,
left me to rot in this alley.
you never wanted me, never loved me.
i'd put the razor to my neck for you, only for you.
what would you do for me? </3


i wanted to put it up on the other forum i'm on but they'd call me an idiot.
i want crits, please. <3

[HUNDLZ]

Ah, it's... it simply tells how much pain yu must be in, and it makes me sad :( Because I want you to be happy, because you deserve it :) (And I deserve some kind of punishment for using "because" too often :P )

How about we agree you'll give me one that's a bit lighter, when the sun will be shining for you again :) <3 (Promise to tell you when it will for me... if ever :( )

[Asylum]

this is really good