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Obscene Eyedeas
March 30th, 2010, 05:08 PM
Alone in a cage
Noone will know
The pain we endure
So that others may see

Pain is our saviour, it gives and recieves
The arogance and ire of those we may see
the angels are in revolt for all they can see
Is ire and evil, along the plane we lay free

Their eyes burn like coals unforgiving by nature
There souls call for justice on wrongs we commited
We cannot linger for the power that they hold
Will make us face the light we cannot bare

Who will be set free and
who will meet the night
You see them coming
but for dark or for light

Scarface
March 30th, 2010, 06:13 PM
[QUOTE=Archangel_Liriel;833963]Alone in a cage

the angels are in revolt for all they can see
Is ire and evil, along the plane we lay free

Those are my favorite lines. You feeling in this poem really ring true In my heart. Very cool.:cool:

Lemonlover934
March 31st, 2010, 02:41 PM
This is really amazing :). Your writing is just amazing, as are you <3 x

Obscene Eyedeas
March 31st, 2010, 02:44 PM
Thank you guys :) that means a lot

Scarface
March 31st, 2010, 04:15 PM
Anytime Laura Keep them coming!