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Asylum
March 24th, 2010, 04:44 PM
You left me questioning that night
I longed to see you in my site
Not knowing if you were going to die
Al I had was tears I cried
Death wasn't a begining but an end
You wre my only true friend
I stayed up night after night
trying to show you the light
trying to make you be alright
But my words were meaningless in your eyes..
I guess this really is goodbye?
I know how you feel I've been there before
Got out of the darkness and ready to soar.
Soaring into a beutiful newlife
Nothing is worth this much strife.
If I can pull through
I know you can too
I'll be with you right by your side
Until my question is answered are you alive?

Bels_Revenge
March 29th, 2010, 04:33 AM
I really like this :)

Asylum
March 29th, 2010, 08:40 AM
thank you Bella :)

pixie1234
March 29th, 2010, 01:53 PM
aww thats really beautiful i had tears in my eyes whilst reading that :) xx

Asylum
March 31st, 2010, 11:19 PM
aww thanks ashleigh :)

Fiction
April 1st, 2010, 03:19 PM
Thats so sad! I can relate to this so well i love it :)

Asylum
April 2nd, 2010, 12:06 PM
thank you Kathy :)