A little rhyme of mine

[Scarface]

Time-

While time still fly's
I'm gonna make you
mine in time don't deny
please don't cry because we roll
in style drive for miles because
our payroll only piles, we lay the tiles of
life. I'm not going to be a door mat for you or your cat like you spat in my face made me feel like a disgrace my heart pace still races when i see your face. In time at first i thought you were sublime doing crime so now your doing the time for it all thinking your standin tall now im gonna call you on your shit so you better sit because
what i spit is true until my face turns blue time just flew now i know were through

~Ronnie
Please give me your feedback. was really feeling it today

[Aspiringanonymous]

Music :arrow: The Open Book

I think the way you structured it is very interesting.

[jakob oliver]

dude...i like it..ur a good poet

[Scarface]

Thanks man i was just feeling it at the time and i just had to let it out.

[Bels_Revenge]

I really like the way its structured

[Scarface]

Thanks