Heroin Blues

[deadpie]

Well, you guys wanted more. I would love if someone could tell me my spelling errors. Grammar Nazi's appreciated.
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Fucking disfigured face staring at me
That won't let me sleep
I can only dream of nothing
You can complain and blame
All your fucking issues on me
But I really never gave a shit
At least she's not on her period yet

Tin foil in one hand
A lighter in the other
I know that you can't
Even fucking bother

Just get your hands off my chest
I don't care if it makes you wet
I don't care about how you want it bad
I want you out of my fucking head
You're trying to pull me close
But I'm just tightening up the rope

This could be our heroin blues
Where we've got no more clean syringes left to use
It's Hepatitis C or more therapy
I don't think life was really meant for me

[Blood]

Very nice.

[trn19]

Very good, I think. Maybe the last line could be improved.

[2D]

Fucking awesome Tim.

Once again, the only poetry I like.