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Blood
March 20th, 2010, 02:28 PM
Death

When death comes around
It comes at you without a sound

It’ll come and rip out your reason to boast
And take away the ones you love most

It’ll take away your pride
Give you that one reason to hide

It’ll come and succeed its reason for being here
And guess what? You couldn’t even hear it

It’ll hurt you, it’ll cause pain
It might even make you look at yourself in shame

It might come in a disguise, but through your eyes
it’s the same, and it causes much pain



Not one of my best ones, but I still like it.

Kaya
March 23rd, 2010, 09:05 PM
reminds me of my brother...

jakob oliver
March 24th, 2010, 04:13 PM
wow...ur good tat poetry

Bels_Revenge
March 29th, 2010, 04:51 AM
Thats really good :D

Blood
April 6th, 2010, 11:56 AM
Thanks guys (:

xx

Marcie
April 20th, 2010, 04:29 PM
I like that! it's really good :-)

Asylum
April 20th, 2010, 04:38 PM
i really like this, it's awesome

Jess
April 20th, 2010, 08:20 PM
Really good!