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Asylum
March 15th, 2010, 09:01 AM
broken


you left me broken, motionless on the ground
i was so confused and scared i didn't make a sound
you were my friend
i thought you were a God send.
when all i had was nothing you were someone i had that cared
now whenever i see you i jsut get scared
scared that the abuse will jsut return
no matter what i do, cut, bite, burn
it doesn't take the feeling away
now there is nothign left to say
you left me feeling dirty and used
remeber your face and the day i was abused
the flashbacks will haunt me until the day i die,
i wish i could just say to you and the memory goodbye
things you have both said and done
will never be redone
what is done is done
and now jsut a memory

TigerLily
March 15th, 2010, 05:38 PM
Yuki, you should be proud of yourself for writing such a powerful poem, it takes a lot of courage :hug3:
Take care <3

Asylum
March 15th, 2010, 09:39 PM
Thank you Rachel <3 :D

Blood
March 17th, 2010, 10:37 PM
I agree, this poem is beautiful and powerful.

Quick_Sylver
March 17th, 2010, 10:44 PM
Wow.... :hug3: That's amazing Yuki. Its hard to write about such things. Especially as powerfully written as that was.

clovermcm
March 18th, 2010, 04:57 PM
That's amazing. I love it.

Asylum
March 22nd, 2010, 08:57 AM
thank you guys :) <3

Triceratops
March 23rd, 2010, 01:12 PM
:hug3:
This made me shed a tear.
It takes courage to write about these kinds of things. Very well done. :)

Scarface
March 23rd, 2010, 01:29 PM
Wonderful hun fabulous. Hope you post more!!! i can feel it

Asylum
March 23rd, 2010, 06:03 PM
Thank you Alvina, thank you Ronnie :)

jakob oliver
March 26th, 2010, 02:29 PM
i could feel the feeling....a poem that powerful is the best kind of poem..it gives others hope

Asylum
March 29th, 2010, 08:39 AM
thank you Jakob for the nice feedbakc :)