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Cosmic
March 14th, 2010, 01:21 PM
Following my theme of nature from "Illumination"...

Cold

The sun burns orange impression
Along Earth’s smogged curvature.
We wreak havoc on her absent revenge.
Cold in sky.
Cold in ground.
Cold inside.

And we shiver in the grave,
Of Mother’s Earth.

Comments, insights and critiques are most welcome.

Scarface
March 14th, 2010, 01:29 PM
The sun burns orange impression Along Earth’s smogged curvature. brilliant. it paints an image in my head. wonderful man keep em coming

Cosmic
March 15th, 2010, 02:24 PM
The sun burns orange impression Along Earth’s smogged curvature. brilliant. it paints an image in my head. wonderful man keep em coming

Thank you very much :D I'm so glad you enjoyed it ^^