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Cosmic
March 11th, 2010, 03:51 PM
A collaborative piece... you may recognise some of the words.

I feel foreign
A project in reframing

Many people started to look
at my join date,
and even
my PMing,
with Sarcastic comments.

On my reply, second reply
here– by the veterans.

And I am expecting a second reply,
and even I replied.

when the Should

They just kept their feet away from the pool of mud.

First of all:
Yes.
I don't have much experience around here.

But mind you.
I do have. On
much more on other.
Things.

Some of the thing are related to here.
Some of them aren't.
I do not lead much here and there.

I am sorry if you cannot understand me and even communicate me.

I had grown interest to this place.
But does it not sway me away from it?

And I basically visit VT, at least once a day.
But obviously,
from the past weeks
I am here on daily basis.
I experience and indulge my self into this place.

Doesn't make less than others.

And thank you for you contributions.*

*'Cooperation' is irrelevant so I added 'contribution' instead.

Credit also goes to Shadoukun and Matthew.

Harley Quinn
March 11th, 2010, 04:06 PM
Aha, I really like this piece :)
nice words from threads :P
well done I enjoyed reading that.

Shadoukun
March 12th, 2010, 09:06 AM
I've taken poetry classes, and none of them have compared to this masterpiece of rhetoric and emotion. Bravo, sir.