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radarlove413
March 9th, 2010, 10:46 PM
Summary: On a beautiful day somebody with a weapon entered a local high school. Armed with a gun and pure revenge, that person's actions would end up never being able to leave the people it touched. Come now and hear the story of this tragedy, finding out the tangle of truths that always lie behind such a desperate act.

This is a three-part story I completed about a year ago. Since it's too long to fit into a post nicely, I've linked to my livejournal where the story is posted.

Read here at sunshines_rain (http://sunshines-rain.livejournal.com/41064.html).

Input/crit?

Magus
March 10th, 2010, 04:17 AM
It is well written and nothing big in there either. So, all in all it went good.

Jess
March 10th, 2010, 07:22 AM
school blocked it, I will read it at home, but I bet it's really good

radarlove413
March 10th, 2010, 11:37 PM
Thanks :)