critec my song please -remember (lyrics to song i wrote) piano part in G minor

[Asylum]

hey guys can you criticize my lyrics, i'll add a link to the piano part once i video tape it. thans :)

Remeber, remember what we had
remeber, remeber our love

you said you loved me
you'd never leave me,

I guess you lied

now we're left broken,
waiting for the end,

remember, remeber what we had
remember, remember please just look at us

we were perfect,
thought we'd never love any other

but now... just look at us!
hanging on threads waiting for it all to end

remember remeber don't let our love die
remember remember you and i

just remeber......