kaz009
February 28th, 2010, 08:15 PM
Hey :)
what do you think of my lyrics so far? and any suggestions on anything?
much help needed :)
and do you think this song should be a slow, acoustic or fast rock song? hmm duno :)
(Intro only guitar, acoustic)
You sat on your bench where we met.
Forever and ever you said.
(Kick into all the instruments)
Were walking around, love in our eyes
Running around, fooling around
Dancing around, playing around
I love you, you are a burning flame.
Our adventure had only just begun
Millions of people out there
But I always keep running back
I loved you lots, but now it is done
what do you think of my lyrics so far? and any suggestions on anything?
much help needed :)
and do you think this song should be a slow, acoustic or fast rock song? hmm duno :)
(Intro only guitar, acoustic)
You sat on your bench where we met.
Forever and ever you said.
(Kick into all the instruments)
Were walking around, love in our eyes
Running around, fooling around
Dancing around, playing around
I love you, you are a burning flame.
Our adventure had only just begun
Millions of people out there
But I always keep running back
I loved you lots, but now it is done